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Example · Recommendation request to a professor

Email asking a professor for a recommendation letter

A short email that asks clearly in the first paragraph, explains how the letter is submitted, suggests what the professor could mention and makes it easy to say no.

196 words 7 paragraphs 1 min read

Who wrote it

Maya Khoury graduated in computer science in Beirut and works as a data analyst. She asks the professor who supervised her senior project for a letter for a master’s in Milan.

The writer and every detail about them are fictional.

What went into the template
The professor, and how they know you
Dr Nadim Rizk: taught my Data Mining course (spring 2023) and supervised my senior project (2023 to 2024)
What you are applying for
MSc Data Science and Economics, University of Milan
Deadline and how to submit
10 February 2027, through the university’s online system: it emails the referee a link
What they could mention
Highest mark in Data Mining, class of 45; senior project: predicting generator fuel demand for 3 Beirut neighbourhoods from weather data, presented at the department open day

The writer’s facts, as typed into the template’s form. The example uses nothing else.

The example

Recommendation request to a professor: Email to a professor

Numbered notes in the margin explain each choice.

Subject: Recommendation letter for the MSc in Data Science and Economics, University of Milan (deadline 10 February)1

Subject line

Note 1: The deadline is in the subject line, so the email can be found again when it matters.

Dear Dr Rizk,

Greeting

I am applying for the MSc in Data Science and Economics at the University of Milan, and I would be grateful if you would write a recommendation letter for me2. You taught me in Data Mining in spring 20233 and supervised my senior project the following year.

The request and a reminder

Note 2: The request comes in the first sentence, in a polite form that is still direct.

Note 3: A course and a year let the professor place her at once, even years later.

The deadline is 10 February 2027. Once I enter your name and email in the application system, it will send you a link to upload the letter directly, so nothing needs to come through me4.

Deadline and how to submit

Note 4: It explains the process and keeps the letter confidential, which referees and universities both expect.

If it helps, you could mention that I finished Data Mining with the highest mark in a class of 45, and my senior project, in which I predicted the generator fuel demand of three Beirut neighbourhoods from weather data and presented the results at the department’s open day. I would be happy to send my CV, my statement of purpose and a one-page summary of the project.

What he could mention

I know this is a busy time of year. If you are not able to write it, I will completely understand.5

An easy way to say no

Note 5: A professor who can say no easily gives a real yes. A lukewarm letter does more harm than none.

Thank you very much,
Maya Khoury

Structure

How it is built

Each part in order, with its share of the words.

  1. Subject line 17 words
  2. Greeting 3 words
  3. The request and a reminder 47 words
  4. Deadline and how to submit 35 words
  5. What he could mention 67 words
  6. An easy way to say no 21 words

Checklist

Before you send

Go through your own draft line by line.

Before and after

Common mistakes and how to fix them

Lines like these turn up in many drafts by Arabic speakers. Each fix keeps the meaning and changes only the English.

Before

Dear Doctor, I want from you a recommendation letter.

After

Dear Dr Rizk, I would be grateful if you would write a recommendation letter for me.

“Dear Doctor” on its own sounds like a patient’s note, and “I want from you” is أريد منك word for word. Use the title with the surname and a polite request.
Before

Please send it as soon as possible.

After

The deadline is 10 February 2027.

“As soon as possible” sounds like pressure and gives no date. A real deadline is both clearer and more polite.
Before

You know me very well, so you can write anything.

After

If it helps, you could mention my senior project, in which I predicted the generator fuel demand of three Beirut neighbourhoods.

Leaving it all to the professor leads to a general letter. Remind them of one or two specific things they saw.

Questions people ask

How early should I ask for a recommendation letter?

At least three to four weeks before the deadline, and earlier in December and January, when professors write many letters. Asking early is itself a courtesy.

Should I offer to draft the letter myself?

Only if the professor asks. Offer material instead: your CV, your statement and a few points they could mention. If they do ask for a draft, the recommendation letter example in this library shows what a strong one looks like.

What if the professor does not reply?

Send one short reminder after about a week, in the same thread. If there is still no answer two weeks before the deadline, ask your second choice and let the first professor know politely.

Every writer in this library is fictional, and so is every detail about them. Universities and companies appear only as places someone applies to; the professors, papers and facts mentioned around them are invented for teaching. Use the examples to learn the moves, never as text to copy: committees notice, and your own facts are stronger.