Email to a possible partner organisation proposing a pilot
Who wrote it
Mai Abdelrahman coordinates four village libraries in Minya, in Upper Egypt. She writes to an international book charity to propose a small pilot.
The writer and every detail about them are fictional.
What went into the template
- Who you are writing to
- Dr Karen Holt, Head of Programmes, Pages Abroad
- Your organisation, in one line
- Nour Libraries runs four village libraries in Minya, Upper Egypt, with 1,200 registered children
- What you propose together
- A six-month pilot: Pages Abroad sends 500 English picture books; our volunteers run a weekly English story hour in each library and report borrowing every month
- What they gain
- A small, monitored pilot in a region where they have no partner yet; monthly borrowing data; photos and stories shared with families’ consent
- The next step you ask for
- A 20-minute call next week
The writer’s facts, as typed into the template’s form. The example uses nothing else.
The example
Partner outreach email: Partnership
Numbered notes in the margin explain each choice.
Subject: A six-month pilot: English picture books for four village libraries in Minya1
Subject line
Note 1: The subject line already contains the proposal, its size and its place.
Dear Dr Holt,
Greeting
Nour Libraries runs four village libraries in Minya, in Upper Egypt, where 1,200 children are registered2. None of our libraries has an English section yet, and we would like to start one with you.
Who we are
Note 2: A real, modest number instead of “thousands of beneficiaries”. It reads as honest.
Our idea is a six-month pilot. Pages Abroad would send 500 English picture books, and our volunteers would run a weekly English story hour in each library and report borrowing to you every month3.
The proposal
Note 3: The proposal says who does what. The partner can picture it working.
For Pages Abroad, it would be a small, monitored pilot in a region where you do not yet have a partner4, with monthly data on how the books are used, and photos and stories that families have agreed to share.
What they gain
Note 4: The benefit is written from the partner’s side: what they get, not what we need.
Would you be open to a 20-minute call next week5 to see whether this could fit your plans?
One small next step
Note 5: A small first step is easy to accept. Asking for a partnership in the first email rarely works.
Kind regards,
Mai Abdelrahman
Coordinator, Nour Libraries
Structure
How it is built
Each part in order, with its share of the words.
Checklist
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Before and after
Common mistakes and how to fix them
Lines like these turn up in many drafts by Arabic speakers. Each fix keeps the meaning and changes only the English.
We are a leading organization serving thousands of beneficiaries and we seek synergies with your esteemed organization.
Nour Libraries runs four village libraries in Minya, in Upper Egypt, where 1,200 children are registered.
We want you to support our libraries.
We would like to suggest a six-month pilot.
We hope for a fruitful cooperation between our two organizations.
Would you be open to a 20-minute call next week to see whether this could fit your plans?
Questions people ask
How do I write a first email to a possible partner organisation?
One sentence on who you are, a concrete proposal (who does what, how much, for how long), what the partner gains, and one small next step such as a call. Keep it under 200 words.
Should I ask for funding in the first email?
Usually not. Start with a small, concrete collaboration and a conversation. Funding discussions go better once the partner knows your work.
What if I do not know who to write to?
Look for the programmes or partnerships lead on their website or on LinkedIn. A named person is far more likely to reply than a general inbox.
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