Thank-you email after a job interview
Who wrote it
Youssef Trabelsi, a data analyst in Tunis, had a video interview with the head of data at a delivery company. He writes the next morning.
The writer and every detail about them are fictional.
What went into the template
- Who interviewed you
- Sana Ben Amor, Head of Data, Tawsil Express
- What is it for?
- Thank-you, within a day
- The role, and when you met
- Data Analyst, video interview on Tuesday 3 November
- One thing from the conversation
- She said the team rebuilds the Monday delivery report by hand every week; I suggested a scheduled SQL query feeding a dashboard
- Anything to add
- Link to a dashboard I built last month from public transport data with the same pattern: example.com/youssef/transit
The writer’s facts, as typed into the template’s form. The example uses nothing else.
The example
Follow-up after an interview: After the interview
Numbered notes in the margin explain each choice.
Subject: Thank you: Data Analyst interview, 3 November1
Subject line
Note 1: The subject names the role and the date. An interviewer who saw five candidates that day knows at once who wrote.
Dear Ms Ben Amor,
Greeting
Thank you for taking the time to talk with me yesterday about the Data Analyst role. I enjoyed hearing how the team works, and especially your point about the Monday delivery report2 that is rebuilt by hand every week.
Thanks and one detail
Note 2: One detail from the conversation proves the email was written for her, not copied.
I have been thinking about it since.3 A scheduled SQL query feeding a simple dashboard could have that report ready before anyone arrives on Monday. Last month I built a small dashboard from public transport data that follows the same pattern4: example.com/youssef/transit
Adding value
Note 3: Returning to their problem shows how he would work, which is more persuasive than thanks.
Note 4: A link to real work, tied to their problem, adds something the CV could not.
I am very interested in the role5, and I would be glad to help with that report from my first week.
Interest, without pressure
Note 5: Clear interest, no question about the decision and no deadline. The email is short enough to read on a phone.
Best regards,
Youssef Trabelsi
Structure
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Checklist
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Before and after
Common mistakes and how to fix them
Lines like these turn up in many drafts by Arabic speakers. Each fix keeps the meaning and changes only the English.
Thank you for your precious time.
Thank you for taking the time to talk with me yesterday about the Data Analyst role.
I am waiting for your decision as soon as possible.
I am very interested in the role, and I would be glad to help with that report from my first week.
As I mentioned in the interview, I have three years of experience in Excel, SQL and Power BI.
Last month I built a small dashboard from public transport data that follows the same pattern.
Questions people ask
When should I send a thank-you email after an interview?
Within a day, ideally the next morning. Later than that, it reads as a formality rather than interest.
I was interviewed by three people. Do I write to all of them?
If you have their emails, yes: a short note to each, each with a different detail from what they said. If you only have the recruiter’s, write to them and ask them to pass on your thanks.
I forgot to mention something important. Can I add it?
Yes, in one or two lines, as this email adds a link to relevant work. Do not rewrite your whole answer; add the one thing that was missing.
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